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11-25-2014, 12:22 PM

(09-20-2014, 12:39 PM)Tamara Wrote: large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live

or for more clarity,

slipping feet into large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live

I think the original is all that is needed. I really can relate to this for obvious reasons. This touched me deeply. It had a such a luminosity; a humanity. Thank you for posting this...

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