three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change)
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Scent of her clings to me- naked november


Hung over- heaven found - big mac


Orion's belt held up by palm fronds


Little boy stutters- little girl


2)

Odd snow fall- defiance of mute saguaros

blood red light- smoke alarm


3)

Evening blast of formless wind- spine shivers


heavy night broken window- gunshot






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(Ahhhh, wtf...)

Hung over- heaven found - big mac




Orion's belt held up by palm fronds




Little boy stutters- little girl



2)

blood red light- smoke alarm


3)

heavy night broken window- gunshot
cliche my forte
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three one line poems: my attempt at monoku (title change) - by azure - 11-25-2014, 11:57 AM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 06:19 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 06:32 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 06:42 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 06:38 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:02 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:18 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:21 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 07:27 PM
RE: three one line haiku: my monoku - by billy - 11-25-2014, 07:30 PM



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