an attempt at haiku.
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Warm earth, thawing cold

There she stood smiling at me

I take this step so bold

 

The earth is still new,

And so are we; I asked her

And she said, "I do."

 

Summer like a flame

Burning passion forever

Our desire not tamed

 

 

Locusts sing there song

all seeking what I have found

Children aren't wrong

 

the days grow colder

My children I raise ,While my

Love never smolders

 

leaves fall from the trees

so too my children now leave

making their own home

 

frozen ponds iced up

my life now forfeit, I see

my love smiles at me
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an attempt at haiku. - by jonatron5 - 11-24-2014, 01:48 AM
RE: an attempt at haiku. - by rowens - 11-25-2014, 06:46 AM
RE: an attempt at haiku. - by Requiem - 11-27-2014, 04:15 AM
RE: an attempt at haiku. - by Mark D. Windmill - 11-28-2014, 04:58 AM



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