Orchids

[vagabond]

Delicious!

Your morning lips
like poppy seed tea,
served on Sundays,
when gray skies kept us
inside doing crosswords
until three o’clock.                               so, overall, the morning lips are like doing crosswords on a gray sunday? or is it me, not getting the picture?

Remember when
we played hooky,
and made love among
the looming oaks
of Cibolo Creek?                                   

I thought I’d
buy some orchids
on your birthday,
so we could watch them
wither as we laugh
October away.                              is it love you want to watch wither away, or do you refer to other "orchids"?

maybe it´s just a reader´s problem but I don´t get any meaning out of this.