Janitorial Worker

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Janitorial Worker
 
forgotten building
old gray-haired woman with mop
bleach covers the floor
 
–Erthona
 
©2014

Drear, industrial imagery. I liked how 'gray-haired', 'mop', and 'bleach' worked together to create a scene overlooked. The spotlight shines on a mundane goddess that in the daily hustle is practically invisible. I'm not too keen on the word 'old' in L2. I think it isn't necessary, although its importance is understandable. Nice work.