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[Filíocht]

It was a little bit clunky at parts, the grammar etc. the message itself was so lofty that I'd be required to have it read to me in a nursery-rhyme style. But seriously, this was well written & I loved the idea of it, it just didn't hit me as hard as it could have given the essential concept. Take note of the comments posted above, I needn't reiterate. All in all, good stuff, keep at it.