11-20-2014, 08:04 PM
Firstly, the rhyming scheme alone makes it enjoyable to read,
the usage too of other euphonious effects adds to this, so
all that was left to do was to be as surgical as possible in conveying your message,
and it doesn't get much more sharp than using aids as a metaphor for love.
Well written, good poem, and thanks for sharing - I enjoyed reading.
the usage too of other euphonious effects adds to this, so
all that was left to do was to be as surgical as possible in conveying your message,
and it doesn't get much more sharp than using aids as a metaphor for love.
Well written, good poem, and thanks for sharing - I enjoyed reading.