Pilate
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The sheer confusion of it, as it drops from line to line
with a structure to make one wonder
how the poem didn't simply fall off the page
It also works wonderfully in conveying the message in what
I believe to be the intended one (what I got)
of humility & guilt in mortality.
I do love chewing this juicy bone, and can
confirm for your sense & your sweet conscience
that there is no God but man.
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Pilate - by paranoid marvin - 11-20-2014, 01:49 AM
RE: Pilate - by Filíocht - 11-20-2014, 07:59 PM
RE: Pilate - by azure - 11-22-2014, 07:51 PM
RE: Pilate - by paranoid marvin - 11-22-2014, 08:31 PM
RE: Pilate - by azure - 11-22-2014, 09:08 PM
RE: Pilate - by Isaias - 11-22-2014, 11:55 PM
RE: Pilate - by jonatron5 - 11-23-2014, 03:08 PM
RE: Pilate - by lock1 - 11-24-2014, 03:38 PM
RE: Pilate - by calypist - 11-30-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: Pilate - by Beacherjosh - 12-04-2014, 11:43 AM



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