Next morning
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(11-14-2014, 04:47 AM)Leanne Wrote:  Cheers Mel, maybe I should just go back to writing limericks.

A girl like her didn't deserve
to have to give head to a perve
he stood there and smoked
she gagged and she choked
then bit off his willy -- what nerve!
I like that you shift the locus of power on the last line.
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Messages In This Thread
Next morning - by Leanne - 11-13-2014, 11:54 AM
RE: Next morning - by bena - 11-14-2014, 03:30 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-14-2014, 04:47 AM
RE: Next morning - by Brownlie - 11-15-2014, 05:13 AM
RE: Next morning - by bena - 11-14-2014, 04:52 AM
RE: Next morning - by just mercedes - 11-14-2014, 06:02 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-14-2014, 06:04 AM
RE: Next morning - by Keith - 11-14-2014, 09:24 AM
RE: Next morning - by GerryMattia - 11-14-2014, 05:29 PM
RE: Next morning - by Keith - 11-15-2014, 03:42 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-15-2014, 05:00 AM
RE: Next morning - by Brownlie - 11-15-2014, 05:31 AM
RE: Next morning - by milo - 11-15-2014, 07:17 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-15-2014, 07:22 AM
RE: Next morning - by milo - 11-15-2014, 07:27 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-17-2014, 04:13 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-17-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: Next morning - by SimikPK - 11-17-2014, 06:31 AM
RE: Next morning - by tectak - 11-17-2014, 07:01 PM
RE: Next morning - by tectak - 11-17-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-17-2014, 06:33 AM
RE: Next morning - by SimikPK - 11-17-2014, 06:40 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-17-2014, 07:18 AM



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