11-15-2014, 05:07 AM
(11-14-2014, 06:08 PM)GerryMattia Wrote: "You have to pick your battles" - as a poet, you leave the last bit you re-wrote in your journal and try hard not to confess to the world you didn't get it right the first time. "Mouth to flume" was a first time read for me -- it's a good line.On a workshop, no you do not. Azure has done exactly as we ask by contributing excellent, considered feedback and showing attention to editing. Leaving the original for comparison shows the editing process, so that others may learn from your mistakes.
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