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Next morning
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11-15-2014, 03:42 AM
Come on guys please remeber this has been posted in serious, all I have read so far have been one liners that do not offer the poet very much by way of constructive feedback. Imagine if this was your poem, would you be happy? most of the comments so far wouldn't even cut it in mild. ModÂ
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Next morning - by Leanne - 11-13-2014, 11:54 AM
RE: Next morning - by bena - 11-14-2014, 03:30 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-14-2014, 04:47 AM
RE: Next morning - by Brownlie - 11-15-2014, 05:13 AM
RE: Next morning - by bena - 11-14-2014, 04:52 AM
RE: Next morning - by just mercedes - 11-14-2014, 06:02 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-14-2014, 06:04 AM
RE: Next morning - by Keith - 11-14-2014, 09:24 AM
RE: Next morning - by GerryMattia - 11-14-2014, 05:29 PM
RE: Next morning - by Keith - 11-15-2014, 03:42 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-15-2014, 05:00 AM
RE: Next morning - by Brownlie - 11-15-2014, 05:31 AM
RE: Next morning - by milo - 11-15-2014, 07:17 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-15-2014, 07:22 AM
RE: Next morning - by milo - 11-15-2014, 07:27 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-17-2014, 04:13 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-17-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: Next morning - by SimikPK - 11-17-2014, 06:31 AM
RE: Next morning - by tectak - 11-17-2014, 07:01 PM
RE: Next morning - by tectak - 11-17-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-17-2014, 06:33 AM
RE: Next morning - by SimikPK - 11-17-2014, 06:40 AM
RE: Next morning - by Leanne - 11-17-2014, 07:18 AM
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