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Spider (content)
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11-14-2014, 04:30 AM
Thanks for the critique. I tend to be too damn cryptic. This one is going under the knife for punctuation mistakes, and point of view. Sloppy in my posting I confess, and believe I was frothing at the mouth to get this poem analyzed. As for the POV, I confused myself.
cliche my forte
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Spider (content) - by azure - 11-14-2014, 12:38 AM
RE: Spider (content) - by bena - 11-14-2014, 04:11 AM
RE: Spider (content) - by azure - 11-14-2014, 04:30 AM
RE: Spider (content) - by shemthepenman - 11-14-2014, 06:15 AM
RE: Spider (content) - by GerryMattia - 11-14-2014, 06:08 PM
RE: Spider (content) - by billy - 11-14-2014, 11:44 PM
RE: Spider (content) - by Leanne - 11-15-2014, 05:07 AM
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