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Anxiety (mwaba don)
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11-13-2014, 10:23 PM
I agree with Ray, calm your mind and simplify this poem. When trying to express something that we experience as novice poets, we tend to puke up a slew of nonsense and over dramatic jargon. Drop the flashy words and refine your expression. Relax, detach, and write with a tone and voice that is truly your own.
cliche my forte
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Anxiety (mwaba don) - by Mwaba don - 11-12-2014, 04:45 PM
RE: Anxiety (mwaba don) - by rayheinrich - 11-12-2014, 05:49 PM
RE: Anxiety (mwaba don) - by Mwaba don - 11-12-2014, 07:21 PM
RE: Anxiety (mwaba don) - by billy - 11-12-2014, 07:29 PM
RE: Anxiety (mwaba don) - by Erthona - 11-13-2014, 04:07 AM
RE: Anxiety (mwaba don) - by tectak - 11-13-2014, 07:35 PM
RE: Anxiety (mwaba don) - by azure - 11-13-2014, 10:23 PM
RE: Anxiety (mwaba don) - by azure - 11-13-2014, 11:08 PM
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