The Faceless One
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This poem was brief, and very bland. I would suggest applying more effort into expressing the nature of the subject matter without disrupting the lyrical flow of the piece itself. When writing brief poetry, I have learned from experience to utilize imagery and language that leaves one on edge. The impact of such poems becomes extremely effective once mastered. Keep working on it.
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The Faceless One - by Willpark - 10-15-2014, 09:37 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by cidermaid - 10-15-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: The Faceless One - by gypsyrose - 10-17-2014, 06:27 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by newsclippings - 10-17-2014, 09:08 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by Erthona - 10-17-2014, 12:18 PM
RE: The Faceless One - by Amitey Blyss - 10-25-2014, 01:58 PM
RE: The Faceless One - by SimikPK - 10-28-2014, 02:04 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by superfluid - 11-01-2014, 04:27 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by Heyyous - 11-02-2014, 02:17 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by Leanne - 11-02-2014, 04:18 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by twinked - 11-09-2014, 06:25 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by Paint with words - 11-11-2014, 07:11 PM
RE: The Faceless One - by Pious Baloney - 11-12-2014, 08:12 PM
RE: The Faceless One - by azure - 11-13-2014, 09:59 PM
RE: The Faceless One - by GerryMattia - 11-14-2014, 05:45 PM
RE: The Faceless One - by paranoid marvin - 11-15-2014, 03:49 AM
RE: The Faceless One - by Dymun Fengshui - 12-14-2014, 03:53 PM
RE: The Faceless One - by Leanne - 12-15-2014, 05:17 PM



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