Edit #1 17/11/14
Sunlight glinting on the sink reveals
only remnants of another evening to regret,
sad little crumbs of lipstick, worn
elastic, despair.
Bunny came from a crowded burrow.
No distinguishing features,
just youth and shyness.
Nobody wants you in your dull fur;
shave, polish,
advertise.
Pixels look pretty. Smooth, enhance,
engage. Old dogs become wild wolves,
easy to please with flesh.
Bright smiles cannot shine
under hands that grope, sweat,
turn to claws and
snap!
Bunny brushes away the taste
of the dog that whimpers
until it stops.
Original
Sunlight glinting on the sink reveals
there is no minty goodness,
only remnants of another evening to regret,
sad little crumbs of smudged lipstick, worn
elastic, despair.
Bunny came from a crowded burrow,
no distinguishing features,
just youth and shyness
that lied to her loins. Nobody wants
you in your dull fur; shave, polish,
advertise.
Pixels look pretty. Smooth, enhance,
engage. Old dogs become wild wolves,
easy to please with flesh.
Bright smiles cannot shine
under hands that grope, sweat,
turn to claws and
snap!
Bunny brushes away the taste
of the dog that whimpers
until it stops.
Sunlight glinting on the sink reveals
only remnants of another evening to regret,
sad little crumbs of lipstick, worn
elastic, despair.
Bunny came from a crowded burrow.
No distinguishing features,
just youth and shyness.
Nobody wants you in your dull fur;
shave, polish,
advertise.
Pixels look pretty. Smooth, enhance,
engage. Old dogs become wild wolves,
easy to please with flesh.
Bright smiles cannot shine
under hands that grope, sweat,
turn to claws and
snap!
Bunny brushes away the taste
of the dog that whimpers
until it stops.
Original
Sunlight glinting on the sink reveals
there is no minty goodness,
only remnants of another evening to regret,
sad little crumbs of smudged lipstick, worn
elastic, despair.
Bunny came from a crowded burrow,
no distinguishing features,
just youth and shyness
that lied to her loins. Nobody wants
you in your dull fur; shave, polish,
advertise.
Pixels look pretty. Smooth, enhance,
engage. Old dogs become wild wolves,
easy to please with flesh.
Bright smiles cannot shine
under hands that grope, sweat,
turn to claws and
snap!
Bunny brushes away the taste
of the dog that whimpers
until it stops.
It could be worse