11-13-2014, 06:59 AM
(11-13-2014, 02:45 AM)Erthona Wrote: Tom,
I am fairly sure I have already and recently commented on this as I see you have removed the "soundless air" part of the second stanza. Is the other one somewhere else or did you just wipe it?
dale
hi dale,
yep...there is an edit up. I cannot help you decide which is which as I don't know where you are looking
Best,
tectak

