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[tectak]

I have issues with critiquing your poetry...perhaps it's my bias but I always think they are damn near perfect already.  You may think you went all ambiguous, but hell, I took the leap with you and was never lost.  This reminds me a bit of Plath, and while some people say Plath is overrated, I completely adore her style. So where is the critique?  There is none.  

Black is black....I want my baby back.

Hi bena,
You are too kind....I think.
I confess to editing on line which drives dale crazy as he is at that stage in life when he is unsure if his foot is his own, let alone his thoughts
I mention this because unless you jump on my stuff pretty quickly it changes before your eyes. This may be ethically a little short of moral but shit, it's how I roll.
Best and thanks,
tectak