Blind

[bena]

I have issues with critiquing your poetry...perhaps it's my bias but I always think they are damn near perfect already. You may think you went all ambiguous, but hell, I took the leap with you and was never lost. This reminds me a bit of Plath, and while some people say Plath is overrated, I completely adore her style. So where is the critique? There is none.

Black is black....I want my baby back.