Professor

[just mercedes]

Brownlie has made me feel remiss. So here are a few comments on your poem. I had hesitated to comment because I didn't feel I knew enough about the subject.


So, finally an attempt for a meaningful one from me.

In his compulsory
Social Anthropology I. why this period after I?
most of the talking
wasn't done by him. 'wasn't done by' is a passive and rather clunky construction. Making it active would liven it up - 'someone else did all the talking' or something like that.


He made me review my chapter
of the team research paper.
Irrelevant examples,
he said, but I liked your argument. I like to see direct speech in quotes

Next term he asked me and Demas I wonder why you named Demas but not the prof.
to present our "Role Dynamics" If this is a title, and you've used quotation marks for direct speech, you could italicize this.
to the freshmen.

Scoring B and C
in facultative Social Anthropology II., WTF is facultative Social Anthropology? I've only ever seen the word used in biology. I'm not sure how your system works, but scoring B and C seems to mean  there were two of you, yet three went for a drink - I think you need to rewrite this stanza
the three of us went for a beer. You all shared one beer?

There's a dearth of poetic devices in your poem. It reads rather drily.