Professor
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(11-10-2014, 03:55 AM)SimikPK Wrote:  Ok, so this poem deserves some feedback. Unfortunately,  I'm not the best one to do it.

So, finally an attempt for a meaningful one from me.

In his compulsory
Social Anthropology I.
most of the talking
wasn't done by him. -- I don't know anything about social Anthropology, but ending the line with "him" seems significant.

He made me review my chapter
of the team research paper.
Irrelevant examples,
he said, but I liked your argument.

Next term he asked me and Demas
to present our "Role Dynamics" -- Maybe italicize this and quote "Irrelevant examples," though you may want to check a style guide. 
to the freshmen.

Scoring B and C
in facultative Social Anthropology II.,
the three of us went for a beer.
I don't understand this at all, but that may be because I don't know anything about role dynamics or social anthropology. I suppose the beer part has some sort of meaning that correlates to social anthropology, or it demonstrates something about the Professor. It is quite matter of fact, but I'm really hesitant to give you advice. However, I think there should be some discussion here. 
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Professor - by SimikPK - 11-10-2014, 03:55 AM
RE: Professor - by Brownlie - 11-12-2014, 01:15 PM
RE: Professor - by just mercedes - 11-12-2014, 01:45 PM
RE: Professor - by SimikPK - 11-12-2014, 06:12 PM
RE: Professor - by billy - 11-12-2014, 08:00 PM
RE: Professor - by SimikPK - 11-13-2014, 02:50 AM
RE: Professor - by crow - 11-17-2014, 04:16 AM
RE: Professor - by tomoffing - 11-17-2014, 07:15 PM



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