Who's at the door?

[Keith]

A pleasant read for sure. I found myself smiling learning about this 'family'. Only 'critique'...the "where ever he is he can’t have got far" line did not seem to flow smoothly like the rest of the poem did. It just reads oddly to me. Keep on keepin' on with your writing!

Hi PB, the line is really a cliche and there as reassurance, I thought I had got away with it thanks for your comment. Best Keith