11-12-2014, 04:32 AM
Tom,
I would know nothing about any of that Tom, only you would be looking to get a piece of Tex ass, metaphorically speaking
. I do like the interlinear rhyme, especially that of "belly" and "Machiavelli". It would have been nice were you able to carry it out in every line, that is the middle with the end rhyme. There are a number of odd puns, which seem mainly for puns sake, which of course I am alright with...mainly 
. Of Cornish the bedlam pun is very good. All in all a nice blended scotch, is this my bottle of JWB?
Dale
I would know nothing about any of that Tom, only you would be looking to get a piece of Tex ass, metaphorically speaking
. I do like the interlinear rhyme, especially that of "belly" and "Machiavelli". It would have been nice were you able to carry it out in every line, that is the middle with the end rhyme. There are a number of odd puns, which seem mainly for puns sake, which of course I am alright with...mainly . Of Cornish the bedlam pun is very good. All in all a nice blended scotch, is this my bottle of JWB?Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.