Her Last Night Without Him

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Her Last Night Without Him

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11-12-2014, 12:00 AM

the thumb pulls down the hammer, the finger squeezes the trigger :J:
no other feedback as it's in miscellaneous except to say it was as bad or as good as it could have been

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Her Last Night Without Him - by Owl - 11-09-2014, 07:39 PM

RE: Her Last Night Without Him - by crow - 11-11-2014, 09:58 PM

RE: Her Last Night Without Him - by billy - 11-12-2014, 12:00 AM

RE: Her Last Night Without Him - by azure - 11-15-2014, 10:01 AM

RE: Her Last Night Without Him - by shemthepenman - 11-15-2014, 10:41 AM

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