11-10-2014, 06:53 PM
the poets in the three main sections need more than one liners done in order to garner a post count. /mod
(11-10-2014, 11:04 AM)noname Wrote: I'm finding the word "kelp" hard to get over. Is there any other way you could word this stanza to avoid the help/kelp rhyme? It's just such a strange word that it threw me off.
Otherwise, I really enjoyed this poem and I think the edit is leaps and bounds ahead of your orignal draft.