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The Sea of Truths
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11-10-2014, 11:04 AM
I'm finding the word "kelp" hard to get over. Is there any other way you could word this stanza to avoid the help/kelp rhyme? It's just such a strange word that it threw me off.
Otherwise, I really enjoyed this poem and I think the edit is leaps and bounds ahead of your orignal draft. |
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The Sea of Truths - by oceanwanderer20 - 10-10-2014, 11:42 AM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by simmon - 10-10-2014, 07:45 PM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by ellajam - 10-10-2014, 08:40 PM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by oceanwanderer20 - 10-11-2014, 01:55 AM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by gypsyrose - 10-13-2014, 04:03 AM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by musicismylife78 - 10-13-2014, 10:34 AM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by b.abraham - 10-13-2014, 05:25 PM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by oceanwanderer20 - 11-06-2014, 01:54 PM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by SimikPK - 11-06-2014, 07:24 PM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by noname - 11-10-2014, 11:04 AM
RE: The Sea of Truths - by billy - 11-10-2014, 06:53 PM
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