The Bluffs

[purplejupiter]

I am usually averse to simple end rhymes, but I think the rhyme scheme and musicality really work to evoke the nostalgia you are going for. I do agree with Billy that it seems a bit wordy, in a way that makes it wrap up a little too nicely at the end. It might work to your benefit to play around with the structure and rhythm in the final stanza.