< the broken vase (in retrospect) was breakable >
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(11-02-2014, 10:10 PM)ellajam Wrote:  I continue to enjoy this, especially

Quote:                                (Our badlands come in turquoise hues)
                               Did I fuck you or you fuck me?
                               (The bruise will come eventually)
                               Barbados south of Belleplaine

and the title. The softness of the B sounds work so well to express vulnerability and melancholy, a sense of fondness for a regrettable event. The distance yet unshakable closeness comes through. Thanks for posting it.

You made my non-turquoise (but still beautiful) day.



The immoral of this poem is: "Don't take your fickle husband to symposia in Barbados."
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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RE: < the broken vase (in retrospect) was breakable > - by rayheinrich - 11-09-2014, 11:20 AM



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