11-09-2014, 04:33 AM
I really like the two poems 'talking' to each other as they do. I'm not sure of what to make of the change from 'you' to 'she'. The second is definitely more vivid, but that's totally in keeping with the seasons. I get the feeling of the cycle, life to death to rebirth, and it's a positive thing. Unusual in this age to see a family home handed down through generations. They do become repositories of family history, the history of love.