New to haiku
#4
everyone thanks for the input!
I was driving home and saw in the concrete median a wildflower growing in a crack in the cement; it was about a foot tall and was the only one in the area. it looked like the traffic was avoiding it.
The elimination of the word "single" was on the money. Thanks, maybe " a purple wildflower" since it was a reddish-blue color
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New to haiku - by donbouquet - 11-08-2014, 07:09 AM
RE: New to haiku - by SimikPK - 11-08-2014, 08:19 AM
RE: New to haiku - by just mercedes - 11-08-2014, 08:20 AM
RE: New to haiku - by donbouquet - 11-08-2014, 08:48 AM
RE: New to haiku - by billy - 11-08-2014, 03:55 PM
RE: New to haiku - by srijantje - 11-08-2014, 03:59 PM
RE: New to haiku - by donbouquet - 11-08-2014, 10:31 PM
RE: New to haiku - by bena - 11-10-2014, 11:54 PM



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