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Starling haiku
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 (11-07-2014, 01:54 AM)SimikPK Wrote: Inspired by starlings in Mrs. Johnosni think it's a great edit. it also make me smile (i must be a bad person  )to your question; i think short poems like this work better without any punctuation. maybe an dash at the cut. that way it leaves at least a little ambiguity for the reader and a chance to get the fuck me 'yes' moment |
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Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 01:54 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 02:57 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by Magpie - 11-07-2014, 07:36 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by coy - 11-07-2014, 08:02 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 07:31 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by coy - 11-07-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 07:47 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by donbouquet - 11-07-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by ellajam - 11-08-2014, 01:29 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 11:16 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by ChristopherSea - 11-08-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-08-2014, 03:55 AM
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