Starling haiku
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Inspired by starlings in Mrs. Johnosn

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starling
cherry tree
bang


Original:

Starling
on a cherry tree-
airgun blows.

(They are pest here, too). Not sure if the last line wouldn´t work better as "blow of an airgun", but I am afraid it would bee too long compared to the middle one.
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Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 01:54 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 02:57 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by Magpie - 11-07-2014, 07:36 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by coy - 11-07-2014, 08:02 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 07:31 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by coy - 11-07-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 07:47 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by donbouquet - 11-07-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-07-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by ellajam - 11-08-2014, 01:29 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by billy - 11-07-2014, 11:16 PM
RE: Starling haiku - by ChristopherSea - 11-08-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: Starling haiku - by SimikPK - 11-08-2014, 03:55 AM



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