after the flood (edited)

[cjchaffin]

Hey CJ,
I didn't like the word "right" in line 3. After a few reads I wondered if lines 1 and 2 might be better after 3 and 4. So it might read...

After the rains came
and washed him away,
there was nowhere left
for her to turn.  --- Just a thought

Other than that I adored S3. Made it well worth the read.
Thanks for sharing. -Paul

thanks Paul, i'm going to address that strophe in the edit. glad you liked the last part! thanks again