11-05-2014, 01:17 AM
The two posters above me about covered almost all of my thoughts. I thought your poem invoked some vivid and morose imagery. But I have to agree with Tectak, I don't know what's happening! How/why is this woman bleeding out inside of a creek?
Although I enjoyed what you wrote, it seems like an excerpt from a gripping book, not a poem.
Although I enjoyed what you wrote, it seems like an excerpt from a gripping book, not a poem.
"A man with true morals behaves the same, whether starving or sated."
--Anonymous
--Anonymous