after the flood (edited)
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after the flood


There was nowhere left 
for her to turn,
after the rains
washed him away.
 
So she lay down 
upon the softened meadow,
lost in a stream of consciousness.
 
She tucked herself in
between the sheets of Ulysses
and dreamt with both eyes open,
munching lotus fruit and flowers
as the river widened its mouth.




original:


after the flood

There was nowhere
left for her to turn,
right after the rains
came and washed him away.
 
So she lay down
upon the softened meadow,
lost in a stream
of consciousness.
 
She tucked herself in
between the sheets of Ulysses
and dreamt with both eyes open,
munching lotus fruit and flowers
as the river widened its mouth.
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after the flood (edited) - by cjchaffin - 11-04-2014, 01:37 PM
RE: after the flood - by Keith - 11-05-2014, 07:05 AM
RE: after the flood - by cjchaffin - 11-05-2014, 09:25 AM
RE: after the flood - by Tiger the Lion - 11-05-2014, 07:23 AM
RE: after the flood - by cjchaffin - 11-05-2014, 09:32 AM
RE: after the flood - by milo - 11-05-2014, 07:48 AM
RE: after the flood - by cjchaffin - 11-05-2014, 09:40 AM
RE: after the flood - by Todd - 11-05-2014, 08:14 AM
RE: after the flood - by cjchaffin - 11-05-2014, 09:42 AM
RE: after the flood (edited) - by ellajam - 11-05-2014, 11:58 AM
RE: after the flood (edited) - by cjchaffin - 11-05-2014, 02:37 PM



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