Tastes

[billy]

it's almost perfect. a good show of how we can say old cliched things in an great original way. our differences don't often manifest till it's too late, nor do our wayward cravings one suggestion to stap the point home more would be to change [could] in the 4th line to [would] it really is just a small nit though.

thanks for the read.

Tastes


How quick your savoury tooth turned sweet;
when the sugar market hit the roof of your mouth 
and trickled down your throat—
you could swallow anything. do you have photographs please
 
If you could have reached the cookie jar
when chocolate chips were cheap,
things might have been different.
We might have had something to savour.