December 17, 5:30am

[Wjames]

December 17, 5:30am

A voice from upstairs
says "good morning"  
and it will be.

Glide up stairs,
say "good morning"  
and it will be.  

Hear "I love you"  
and "I missed you".

Be loved and love  
clean flannel sheets and  
and a favorite mug.

Be loved and love  
love and "I love you"  
and "I missed you"  
and "good morning"  
and it will be.

It made me smile, so I think it's a pretty nice poem.

All I could think about was "The End", by the Beatles: "and in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make".

I do think you could give it a better title, as that date/time probably won't mean anything to anyone else but you (you could keep the date in brackets or something). Anyways, I liked the poem.