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Fashion Statements
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11-01-2014, 04:04 AM
(10-29-2014, 07:22 PM)billy Wrote: i just had a quick re-read; how come the meter in the 2nd verse is reversed from the first verse?I hadn't even really thought of it... it's just the way it came out. I think it reads okay with these two stanza's; if I add more I'll either keep alternating metre, or try and change one of the two to whichever metre works better. |
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Fashion Statements - by Wjames - 10-13-2014, 12:03 PM
RE: Fashion Statements - by Anonymous - 10-13-2014, 12:50 PM
RE: Fashion Statements - by cidermaid - 10-13-2014, 05:43 PM
RE: Fashion Statements - by billy - 10-13-2014, 07:50 PM
RE: Fashion Statements - by Wjames - 10-14-2014, 12:15 AM
RE: Fashion Statements - by phacade - 10-21-2014, 04:49 AM
RE: Fashion Statements - by billy - 10-29-2014, 07:22 PM
RE: Fashion Statements - by Wjames - 11-01-2014, 04:04 AM
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