Robin Redbreast
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I agree with JM, this bird needs to go back to school, "to the death I will fight" is indeed awkward.

"I have fire on my belly" A clever usage of what would be a cliche. It gives a great visual.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Robin Redbreast - by Magpie - 10-25-2014, 04:33 AM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by just mercedes - 10-30-2014, 04:28 AM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by Magpie - 11-01-2014, 06:54 PM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by Erthona - 10-30-2014, 07:44 AM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by Magpie - 11-01-2014, 07:01 PM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by Magpie - 11-07-2014, 10:14 AM
RE: Robin Redbreast - by billy - 11-07-2014, 08:00 PM



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