10-30-2014, 05:17 AM
Thank you very much Rowens and owl
Owl I will definitely take in account your critiquing of my lack of original details, I definitely can work on that. In regards to the lack of capitalization, I saw the blue jay in my backyard one day which made me write this poem, so he isn't really an important king and the poem is overall modest, I really try to experiment with different grammar uses and things like that. I was going for modesty with my lack of capitilaztion. It's just something I chose to do, because of e.e. Cummings totally experimental style. Try things out on your own! I chose to not try to follow any other writers techniques because then all poems would be the same and that's not poetry. Poetry is a personal thing in my opinion so make it unique to yourself!
Owl I will definitely take in account your critiquing of my lack of original details, I definitely can work on that. In regards to the lack of capitalization, I saw the blue jay in my backyard one day which made me write this poem, so he isn't really an important king and the poem is overall modest, I really try to experiment with different grammar uses and things like that. I was going for modesty with my lack of capitilaztion. It's just something I chose to do, because of e.e. Cummings totally experimental style. Try things out on your own! I chose to not try to follow any other writers techniques because then all poems would be the same and that's not poetry. Poetry is a personal thing in my opinion so make it unique to yourself!