Night and Day

[SimikPK]

Sorry mods if this is not the proper place to answer, if so, move this somewhere more proper

But don't you think I have a purpose to the choices I made with this poem?

I would like to point out that having a reason for any choices doesnt in itself make the readers or critics approve of those choices. Again, we comment in accord with how we read your poem. You may or may not accept our comments. It is up to you and your goals. But if you want to write poetry, which is communication between the author and the reader, you, I guess, have to pay some attention to what the readers say.

Should I even point out how your repetitive displeasure for cliches betrayed your propensity to embody them?

Please, do comment our poems or posts, and not us. We also did comment your poem, not you.