10-29-2014, 12:41 PM
A really really good comic poem, expressing anxieties many college/high school students feel during those apathetic times, I'm sure
The alternation between long and short lines establishes a firm, enjoyable rhythm. You clearly have some understanding of meter, and craft in general, and that you can marry said knowledge of craft with outgoing wit implies great talent. Thank you for the read
The alternation between long and short lines establishes a firm, enjoyable rhythm. You clearly have some understanding of meter, and craft in general, and that you can marry said knowledge of craft with outgoing wit implies great talent. Thank you for the read
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe