10-29-2014, 03:02 AM
giving orders with song,
springing from his majestic organs,
who dare challenge the king's tongue?
That seems the best part.
A similar crown spikes his head might be something to say. Something could come out of that.
beauty bestowed by Darwin's theory is a problematic line, but it could be used in a more problematic way to benefit the poem.
springing from his majestic organs,
who dare challenge the king's tongue?
That seems the best part.
A similar crown spikes his head might be something to say. Something could come out of that.
beauty bestowed by Darwin's theory is a problematic line, but it could be used in a more problematic way to benefit the poem.