10-26-2014, 07:52 PM
I find it a bit choppy, but that is because I do not like merely wordless poems like this, which is why i want to give you my opinion.
It does convey a beautiful message of unhappiness and desolation emotionally and physically, but my only thing with poems such as this is the message is great yes, but imagine this message in one long continuation of a thought such as a beautifully wordy poem. i understand it may not be your style, but as a poet of opposing styles, i want you to know my view
It does convey a beautiful message of unhappiness and desolation emotionally and physically, but my only thing with poems such as this is the message is great yes, but imagine this message in one long continuation of a thought such as a beautifully wordy poem. i understand it may not be your style, but as a poet of opposing styles, i want you to know my view