10-25-2014, 01:58 PM
Reminds me of an old Megadeth song. Or maybe Metallica.
I like the flow of it, easy to read, easy to convey the meaning of what you are going for. Leaves me as the reader a bit spooked, which I am assuming is the tone. Like another said, it would be good in a haunted house, or as a children's Halloween book. Not meaning to take anything away from the poem.
I like the flow of it, easy to read, easy to convey the meaning of what you are going for. Leaves me as the reader a bit spooked, which I am assuming is the tone. Like another said, it would be good in a haunted house, or as a children's Halloween book. Not meaning to take anything away from the poem.