10-25-2014, 04:00 AM
(10-24-2014, 09:50 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: DelugeIt is a very nice poem, Overal. Thankyou.
Two Sundays ago,
in that biblical rain, (This is a nice line; Biblical rain sounds good.)
you and I, cynical,
sheltered by sarcasm,
with fire enough to dry wit. (These two line combine and read well)
Two months worth in two hours
the newspaper said.

