10-22-2014, 11:32 PM
hi jess and welcome to the house.
write away, it's one of the better ways to improve. saw some of your feedback so thanks for that. don't worry about being taken seriously. all the poets who want to improve will take what you say seriously even if they don't use your suggestions. if that was your first poem i'm impressed, more so that you did an edit. keep it up
write away, it's one of the better ways to improve. saw some of your feedback so thanks for that. don't worry about being taken seriously. all the poets who want to improve will take what you say seriously even if they don't use your suggestions. if that was your first poem i'm impressed, more so that you did an edit. keep it up
(10-22-2014, 11:01 PM)Jesstice Wrote: Hello all of you, I am pretty stoked about this forum, I hope to make good use of the critiques and find out if I feel like I should write another poem possibly many more. I don't take it lightly but I do write emotionally and quickly without thought to the form, I just channel ... that is the way I paint and play music so it's all I know. I haven't written any poetry beyond the single poem I have posted yesterday and now revised today and I haven't read any in years either, but words hit me in the face last night and they weren't a song which is usually what I come up with late at night, so I needed to do something with them and here I am.
I don't know enough to be taken very seriously in critiques, but Ill be giving it my all and saying what I feel - from at least a reader's perspective if not a true poet.
Lovely