10-22-2014, 11:01 PM
Hello all of you, I am pretty stoked about this forum, I hope to make good use of the critiques and find out if I feel like I should write another poem possibly many more. I don't take it lightly but I do write emotionally and quickly without thought to the form, I just channel ... that is the way I paint and play music so it's all I know. I haven't written any poetry beyond the single poem I have posted yesterday and now revised today and I haven't read any in years either, but words hit me in the face last night and they weren't a song which is usually what I come up with late at night, so I needed to do something with them and here I am.
I don't know enough to be taken very seriously in critiques, but Ill be giving it my all and saying what I feel - from at least a reader's perspective if not a true poet.
Lovely
I don't know enough to be taken very seriously in critiques, but Ill be giving it my all and saying what I feel - from at least a reader's perspective if not a true poet.
Lovely