10-22-2014, 04:07 PM
I read this once- I felt betrayed, I felt loss of love. It's bitter but not in a difficult or annoying way. The bitterness isn't about just that relationship or love but about the way the whole world is balanced by the dark and light. It felt like if you had taken that rhythm of, when this happens I see that one step further it would have been too much, you stopped just in time. I really enjoyed this, it felt effortless but completely genuine. Like it fell onto the "paper" without worrying about any constrains or complexities. Well done. Kudos.