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#8
10-22-2014, 02:58 PM
Bena said:

so if you boiled this poem down it would be:

I am a demon.
I am everything you think a demon would be.
While I find you insignificant,
I'm still going to bother with taking you to hell.

--agreed.
A yak is normal.
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Messages In This Thread
Demon - by arbitraryarmor - 10-20-2014, 10:32 PM
RE: Demon - by ray - 10-21-2014, 05:50 AM
RE: Demon - by bena - 10-21-2014, 11:33 AM
RE: Demon - by billy - 10-21-2014, 06:03 PM
RE: Demon - by arbitraryarmor - 10-21-2014, 07:51 PM
RE: Demon - by Todd - 10-22-2014, 05:36 AM
RE: Demon - by arbitraryarmor - 10-22-2014, 06:27 AM
RE: Demon - by crow - 10-22-2014, 02:58 PM



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