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10-21-2014, 07:51 PM

Thanks for the advice, everyone. Harsh critique is good critique nontheless, Bena Smile

And the break in rhythm is there because that's the place in the poem where the form changes, Billy.

Sweet sig by DarkNightCavalier on the MTGS forums.

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Demon - by arbitraryarmor - 10-20-2014, 10:32 PM

RE: Demon - by ray - 10-21-2014, 05:50 AM

RE: Demon - by bena - 10-21-2014, 11:33 AM

RE: Demon - by billy - 10-21-2014, 06:03 PM

RE: Demon - by arbitraryarmor - 10-21-2014, 07:51 PM

RE: Demon - by Todd - 10-22-2014, 05:36 AM

RE: Demon - by arbitraryarmor - 10-22-2014, 06:27 AM

RE: Demon - by crow - 10-22-2014, 02:58 PM

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